Thread:TheDarkestSpirit/@comment-29857221-20170326203718

So i saw a comment on the po,sp page, and you gave a good art critique on my freinds work, i was wondering if you could help me, i am a new artist and really need advice on my work, You see i dont know what to do and how to fix it ect please could you help :)) My art program is firealpaca

Here is my example :) >>> 