Thread:TheDarkestSpirit/@comment-29857221-20170326203718/@comment-27893775-20170326213554

The linework is a bit off, the ears are in very odd angles to the point where I can barely tell where the right one attatches to the head. What's going on with the shape of the nose? I'm not a fan of the head being so seperated from the neck, and the fur has unnatural places where the colors clash. There needs to be more shading on the eye and nose areas especially, as well as the ears and under the head, if the light source is coming from the right (which I take,  it is.) Not a fan of the unnaturally saturated color of the eye. What's with the shape of the left ear? It looks awkward and way more rounded than it should be at this angle. The linework is very wonky and bumpy- are you using pen pressure? I don't like how straight the lines on the insides of the ears, and colored shadows really help a piece pop.

I've never used Firealpaca, though if you get Paint Tool SAI I can help you with the brushes to blend the colors a bit more like I did in the piece below.